托福寫作難點話題解析之new factory near your community

來源:小站教育整理 時間:2020-03-29 11:43:32

   托福寫作的題目類型很廣涉及話題種類繁多,有些話題考生初看之下會有完全沒思路不知道如何展開的困擾。為了避免大家直到考試當中才遭遇這種問題,下面小編就來分享托福寫作各類難點題目的寫作思路解析和高分范文,本期作文話題為:社區附近的新工廠。

  難點話題一覽

  The advantages and disadvantages of a new factory near your community.

  A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

  寫作思路展開結構分析

  大家可以先討論“假設工廠真的落成了,而帶來的好處和壞處”,而后發表看法。從好處來說,考生可以寫直接增加了就業機會(到工廠去上班);間接增加了就業機會(會有很多服務業,比如飯店、商店、超市等等跟著開業)。如果工廠規模足夠大,物流規模也足夠大,那么將最終成為交通改善的起點。另外大的工廠可以繳納很多稅,對地方財政有好處,進而促進社區的繁榮等等。從壞處來寫,大家則可以寫會帶來各種污染,比如,噪音、廢氣、污水,或是工廠不一定會贏利對社區起不到促進作用等等。

  范文賞析

  I live in a primarily agricultural community, and most of the population lives hand to mouth. Parents keep children home from school to work in the fields. If there is a flood or a drought, people starve. A new factory would mean regular monthly salaries as well as protection against natural disasters or a sudden drop in the price of our main agricultural product, say, corn. Regular salaries would allow families the confidence to make investments in their futures. The locals would be able to plan their finances accurately and free themselves from debt. This in turn would encourage entrepreneurship and further develop the local economy. People could begin to open shops, restaurants, dormitories, and entertainment facilities to serve the factory workers with their savings. Profits from these small enterprises would further enrich the local community and turn our relatively poor farmland into a truly profitable development zone. Perhaps more parents could then afford to send all of their children to high school and maybe even college. There would certainly be negative effects as well. If the area becomes prosperous, immigrants from poorer regions will come here looking for work. Because of their relative poverty they will work harder for less money than the locals and drive wages down. There might be more immigrants than factory jobs available, leading to an unemployment crisis with a rising crime rate as a potential negative side effect. On the other hand, the proposed factory would almost certainly have adverse effects on the local environment, particularly in regards to polluting the water. This is perhaps the most serious concern, because without clean water the area cannot sustain life of any kind, com, livestock, or human. However, because of the relatively desperate economic situation of my hometown, I believe the potential benefits of opening a new factory would outweigh the risks. If we take the proper precautions, such as imposing strict environmental standards and providing adequate social services for immigrants, the whole area stands to benefit.

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